First Draft

This is my first draft of my music video, as you can see it is not finished and still has clips in the wrong places.



Mikey; Mikey liked how at the beginning it fades into the first scene, he also liked how the artists work well together and the split screen shot of just the male artists. He also said that it needed more scenes because obviously it is quite empty.

Hannah; She likes how well the actors work together, however she feels we can't see their expressions well when they in front of the black screen. She also like hows there are a variation of different outfits throughout the video.

Claire; Claire enjoyed how there are a variation of different scenes and how I haven't just focused on one artist. She also felt that there needed to be more scenes because it is not finished yet.